Friday, October 14, 2011

100 Words: Clapham Junction

[This "99 Words" was penned whilst I was waiting for a train at Clapham Junction Railway Station. I scribbled it into a notebook; turned the page and forgot about it, unaware that just a few months later, it's sentiments would come back to haunt me.]

The blocks of flats, that stand opposite Clapham Junction are ugly. Made from grey concrete, and brown 1960s pebbledash, with just a dash of cancer; they look like a sick persons shit. The dirty yellow net curtains of the poor under-classes, hang in the hundreds of un-cleaned windows. If anyone I loved, lived there, I wouldn’t be able to forgive myself. Sleep would not come to find me at night. Food would taste foul; drink rancid. If I couldn’t help them get away to somewhere else, what would be the point of me, or my love for them? 

5 comments:

  1. whoa. Powerful.

    I hope whoever you know who lives there, finds it to be very temporary.

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  2. I sometimes think that if all we ever saw of a city was the view from the station or railway line, we'd never, ever want to go there. Every time I go into London, I wonder about the people who live cheek by jowl with the noise and the dirt and the non-stop rattle of the trains, then I come back to the countryside and thank my lucky stars.
    Nicely put Dicky.

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  3. I agree with Nessa - powerful stuff!

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  4. Nessa - Thank you.

    Sharon - Your comment is very well put. Thank you.

    Spencer - Thanks for visiting.

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  5. Wow. Striking short story, Dicky. Loved it!

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