Wednesday, December 07, 2011

100 Words: Always leave them smiling

Tom and Holly arrive at the front door at the same time, as they do nearly every morning of their lives: scrambling around looking for boots and shoes to wear.  They leave the house, and walk together to her car, where they will go their separate ways to work. 
     “Have a nice day honey,” she says as they pull part, after a brief kiss goodbye. 
     “You too... Oh and by the way-“
     She looks at him, smiling.
  “You look beautiful today, and I love you so much.”
     He turns and walks away immediately, knowing that she is still smiling.

7 comments:

  1. This is an amazing piece of writing. I loved it.

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  2. She may be smiling, but she is also wondering what has brought about this early morning declaration... she is now thinking that he must be up to something....
    Sx

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  3. awwww...that made me smile. (but don't tell anyone. I have a reputation...)

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  4. If you are very lucky, sometimes life can be like this :-)

    Thanks Dicky, fab to read.

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  5. This certainly made me smile, lovely piece of writing.

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