Friday, January 20, 2012

100 Words: Born before god

McCann struggles to breathe inside the canvas shelter; dug into the desert sand - not because of the stifling heat - but because the small boy is hovering a few feet from the floor.  Cross legged and alone; he appears to be meditating.  Removing his fedora and both guns, McCann approaches the child with caution.  Sensing him, the boy’s eyes open, and he speaks:

     ‘I was born before god.  First I was born; then god was born, then Jesus was born.’       
    
     Falling to his knees, McCann knows that the search is over.  He has found humanities saviour, or end.

6 comments:

  1. lovely writing Dicky ( as always) :)

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  2. Dicky, short and sweet - when are you going to write a book?

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  3. Is it the beginning or the end? Need to know.

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  4. Hits the spot with a deeply felt punch.

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