Friday, May 04, 2012

Elephant up a ladder

The rain horizontal, past the kitchen window,
till gravity pulls, like an unseen shadow.
It falls back to earth in a gradual ark,
slapping the decking, like a captured shark.
The plastic gutter has buckled and failed,
falls the water to feed the weeds and snails.
Reminds me of a zoo elephant, that I once saw,
as it stood there peeing on the concrete floor.
Born in captivity, he could not see,
the point in his life if he’s not free.
No Serengeti Savannah, or wandering herd,
his eyes see fences - his future is blurred.
He’d fix my gutter from the top of a ladder,
for a chance to empty - in Africa his bladder.


8 comments:

  1. It is amazing that they came from Africa and now they are behind bars. I remember visiting London Zoo every week when we lived in London (with the kids) and the elephant rolled on its keeper after 30 years of living there...not sure what that says...)

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    1. Its the London zoo elephant that I was writing about. I remember going there years ago. Not sure what I think of zoo these days. Thanks for visiting and leaving a comment :)

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  2. I was never a big fan of the zoo. The animals are too sad, or bored, or uninterested in me. Except the monkeys. The monkeys are crazy and entertaining. But then again, I don't have to go to the zoo for that. I can see the same monkey-fun at work.

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    1. Hi Nessa, not sure that I care for zoo's too much either.

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  3. Love it Dicky - zoos can be sad places, even the best ;)

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    1. Thanks Joe. I'm thinking I may never visit one again.

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  4. That last bit made me laugh out loud, but then I felt a bit sad as the essence of it all set in. Very interesting bitter-sweet piece, kept from being depressing by the hilarious imagery, but saved from irreverence by strong meaning.
    Good job!

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  5. "...slapping the decking, like a captured shark..." Now that is interesting imagery! Great poem. I'm not much of zoo person myself, and I'm glad my kids get bored there. I always feel bad for those locked up beasts.

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